Watching the moon alone in the skies brings back childhood memories. All children in our neighborhood would celebrate every time she is full. Since our parents couldn't stop us from playing, they would just gather together and talked about the achievements of their sons and daughters. Yes, we overheard it sometimes. We laughed, ran around, shouted. Our footsteps echoed throughout the neighborhood.
When I went home for a vacation, the entire street was very quiet. There are still children around but I think they are now pre-occupied with electronic gadgets, games, television shows. The silence is deafening. I realized, gone are the days when full moon means instant celebration and when the children ruled the streets.
The moon can be one's bestfriend too. Without anyone to turn to, you can go up to the roof, lie down, and talk to the moon who is very much willing to listen to you. Her light is enough to comfort you. You can tell her your secrets, inspirations, frustrations. She will listen intently. She will be the keeper of your memories and anytime she can refresh them to you. And she won't tell anyone.
When I went home for a vacation, the entire street was very quiet. There are still children around but I think they are now pre-occupied with electronic gadgets, games, television shows. The silence is deafening. I realized, gone are the days when full moon means instant celebration and when the children ruled the streets.
The moon can be one's bestfriend too. Without anyone to turn to, you can go up to the roof, lie down, and talk to the moon who is very much willing to listen to you. Her light is enough to comfort you. You can tell her your secrets, inspirations, frustrations. She will listen intently. She will be the keeper of your memories and anytime she can refresh them to you. And she won't tell anyone.
Full Moon
Full moon,
I sit on this artificial beach
with the half-filled wine bottle
and reminisce the moment
of being together.
This moon
and the gentle breeze witnessed
our first kiss in sunflower field,
can’t forget the mocha scent of your lipstick;
you danced like a fairy,
swayed to the beat of the wind --
I was smitten.
One starless night,
you never came to our own spice-bush,
I waited for your embrace
until the spotlight turned off.
Next month --
there will be another full moon
again,
another moment of reminiscing.
/totomai
Full moon,
I sit on this artificial beach
with the half-filled wine bottle
and reminisce the moment
of being together.
This moon
and the gentle breeze witnessed
our first kiss in sunflower field,
can’t forget the mocha scent of your lipstick;
you danced like a fairy,
swayed to the beat of the wind --
I was smitten.
One starless night,
you never came to our own spice-bush,
I waited for your embrace
until the spotlight turned off.
Next month --
there will be another full moon
again,
another moment of reminiscing.
/totomai
Cheesefest! I think I need an antibiotic now! Where is my sake?
/totomai
01/20/09
Beautiful poem. Those are powerful memories fed by the force of nature.
ReplyDeleteI think this is most enchanting- how inspirational...and your web site as well-
ReplyDeleteLove the cyclical theme of this poem.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. I haven't seen your work before. Welcome to OSI.
ReplyDeleteglad to see you on the bandwagon toto (or on the train?).
ReplyDeletethis is so romantic!
"Yokoso OSI e!"
ReplyDelete(please correct me if i'm wrong)
& thank u for "another full moon"..
@Sandy, thanks. yes, the moon is my bestfriend sometimes lol
ReplyDelete@gmarie, glad to know this poem was inspirational to you. thanks also for liking my site
@Deborah and fourwindshaiga, thanks to you both
@floreta, yes, thanks for the welcome. lol
@zoya, domo arigatou
Nice work, as always - there is something about a full moon that creates, creates and creates more!
ReplyDeletenever ending creation TW!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words, and excellent pictures. The moon can indeed be a friend.
ReplyDeleteI kept thinking of werewolves, vampires, manananggal and others during full moon though. Sometimes, I can't help to scratch my own belly kapag kabilugan na. Nangangati siya, hehehe.
ReplyDeleteI always like your entries. Helps me boost my puwetic skill? LoL.
Seriously, nice post as always. Malamig ngayon, keep warm.
@anthony, yes, it can be our friend most of the times.
ReplyDelete@kuya, hehe may lahi ka din pala. di ko nga binanggit yan baka kasi matakot sila s akin. seriously, salamat po. nakakataba ng puso ang comment nyo hehe naks
hala, may in love. naiwan sa bacolod? he he
ReplyDeletereminiscing childhood days again...ganyan ba tlg pag 31 na? hahaha...joke lng mai...
ReplyDeleteewan ko lng kung me same sa paningin ko, pansinin mo mabuti ang moon, parang c Mama Mary na karga-karga c baby Jesus =)
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@atty, hindi, naiwan sa japan haha
ReplyDelete@mata, yup meron na din nakapagsabi nun. hehe
oo naman 30 ka na din kaya hihi
Love the lyrical way it goes on..
ReplyDeleteclearly fading
Thanks :-)
ReplyDelete@manong: Yosh, ang comment. LOL! I can't stop laughing yet, hahaha!
ReplyDelete@r-yo: You are so right, pag full moon+poetry=in love!
Take it from me. Nostalgic ang entry nato. Not just it recounts childhood days of patintero under the full moon lit. But under the lovers sky... :p
@mariale, mukhang may mga moonlight memories ka a hehe
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