Last year, I visited the Fuji Five Lakes. Between those lakes are villages turning to be tourist attractions as well. One of them is Oshino Hakkai (忍野八海). I haven't heard about it until a friend invited to join the bus tour.
i paint crystal dreams
shattered by a selfish wish
a beggar's last coin
/totomai
The village is quite a throwback to previous Japanese eras. There were eight ponds but I am not sure if I found them all during my visit. I read some related literature about the place and found the story very interesting. Allow me to quote some part of it.
Mt. Fuji World Cultural Heritage Site Asset (registered in June 2013) revered as the "spring of the gods" since long ago, many legends have been told about this site. There are eight springs at Oshino Hakkai Springs. At one time, what we now know as Oshino-mura used to be a lake. Mt. Fuji erupted many times, gradually filling the space between Fujisusono and Mt. Misaka. This abraded and drained the area so that, over long period of time, the lake finally dried up. However, some springs that received water from Mt. Fuji's underground water reservoir remained. Oshino Hakkai is one of the representatives of those springs. more here
The haiku I wrote above is inspired by Matsuo Basho's famous pond haiku (translated by Robert Aiken). I haven't completed reading all of his haiku in Basho : The Complete Haiku but he is definitely inspires me to fine tune my style in writing one. I will have to avoid the abstract terms though.
Furu ike ya Old pond!
kawazu tobikomu frog jumps in
mizu no oto water’s sound
/totomai
2016/07/17
Photo taken with
Nikon D7000 lens used :
Nikkor 10.5 mm
Lovely image and haiku!
ReplyDeleteThanks Thot!
DeleteOh my God this is absolutely breathtaking! :D
ReplyDeleteCheers Sanaa!
DeleteI like it. I can hear it too.
ReplyDeleteAll of us can hear it, I guess. Thanks!
DeleteAnd you do indeed paint crystal dreams - with words and art :)
ReplyDeleteAww, thanks Jae :) Cheers!
Deletebeautiful!
ReplyDeleteArigatou Sumana!
DeleteThe final line of the haiku, carries a strong message.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kerry!
DeleteStunning photography and impressive haiku as usual Totomai. It is always a pleasure to visit.
ReplyDeleteMy pleasure too Robin
DeleteI really love that haiku, stunning contrast between the selfishness and the beggar's sacrifice... Great picture too.
ReplyDeleteThanks Bjorn. The world is full of contrast :)
DeleteI love the picture and the story behind it, even more after you shared your bit on Basho and how you relate to his style. It's always wonderful to see where ideas come from, and better yet, to see where they want to go.
ReplyDeleteThanks Magaly. Basho is making me focused on writing haiku, will try to avoid free verse ones for the meantime :)
DeleteReally a beautiful photo, Totomai! And a fine haiku accompaniment. I like the idea of crystal dreams -- fragile, but beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary. Some dreams are realized when they are broken already
DeleteThe photo is stunning and your haiku speaks volumes.
ReplyDeleteCheers Truedessa!
DeleteWhat a fascinating place, Totomai, steeped in history. You write beautiful haiku.
ReplyDeleteMaybe I'll go back there this winter. Maybe. Thanks Sherry.
DeleteWhat an intriguing Haiku! Perhaps I am begging with my last coin, to make our dreams a reality. I love your photography!
ReplyDeleteMuch appreciated, Susan. We always hold on to our last coin :)
DeleteWhat an amazing story about the ponds and your equally amazing picture and haiku...really a feast for my eyes and soul!
ReplyDeleteArigatou Donna
DeleteGreat haiku, I had to think twice to get it; how true your middle line "shattered by a selfish wish". Fantastic image too
ReplyDeleteThanks Julian
DeleteWhat a fantastic shot!
ReplyDeleteCheers Mama Zen
DeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks ayala
DeleteA lovely nuanced haiku.
ReplyDeleteArigatou Wendy
DeleteI luv your haiku, Japan is a place I would like to visit. And thanks for all the flowers at Poetry Pantry this week
ReplyDeleteMuch love...
You should visit Japan, Gillena :)
Deletestunning photography, and a good haiku!
ReplyDeletei was wondering, is there a story to "a beggar's last coin". :)
Thanks dsnake. Everyday, that's their story :)
DeleteLovely post. I love that you explore the beauty of the world, then photograph and write about it. Your hairy is lovely too.
ReplyDeleteMy pleasure of sharing the parts of the world I've been too Myrna. Thanks
DeleteBeautiful, all of it! (And what better haiku teacher could one have than Basho?)
ReplyDeleteHe is a great teacher. Thanks Rosemary
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